This is okay for a quick read. I wasn't enjoying the longer
book I'd been reading, so decided to read this before bed for something
different.

I liked the main characters, enjoyed their storyline - young
lovers who split up and then reunited after five years. (In my own reading and
writing, I've noticed that's a storyline to which I'm drawn.)
I also liked the London setting, the descriptions brought
the city to life for me.
But I found the frequent mentions of the sister to be
annoying. In general, not a big fan of the best friend/sister thing. The sister
kept being mentioned, even when it didn't seem necessary. Things like, "He
had a nice apartment, his apartment reminded her of the apartment her sister's
boyfriend owned."
I would have rather the focus be on the two main characters
- not the sister and her boyfriend - who I understand were main characters in a
previous novella by this author.
Also, felt like there was a lot of repetition in the
writing. Maybe instead of telling the reader over and over again about how she was clingy
when she was younger, or how her parents had a bad marriage causing her sister decided
to avoid marriage - we could have learned more about the current characters and their relationship. Needed some very thorough
editing, but I guess that would have made the story even shorter. Also, how
many times do I need to be told that her sister has large breasts and she
doesn't? Little things like that started to bother me about the writing and
caused me to start doing a lot of skimming. I don't usually feel the need to
skim something this short.
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